Need suggestion/critiques please
07-18-2007, 05:41 AM
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Giant Nontypical
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RE: Our stores new bow line! Need opinion please.
Maybe inset a small close up of the engraved turkey feathers so people could see what they look like. I'd also like to see close ups of the riser and overlays too, but that many pics would probably make the layout look too junky.[&:]
07-18-2007, 04:22 PM
#4
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Join Date: Apr 2007
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RE: Our stores new bow line! Need opinion please.
yep, I care nothing to see the back of the bow, I want to see a profile, how it looks strung/unstrung to get an idea of the limb design etc
07-20-2007, 10:25 AM
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Nontypical Buck
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Illinois
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RE: Need suggestion/critiques please
i also second putting a profile pic of the bow unstrung....
dont put it on the side put it at the bottom of the page horizontally(where your company info is)
if you want to keep theindian head center itunder neath the words "Iroquois Warrior" or put it in the top left corner....just a suggestion.
get rid of the logo you put with your Company name(not saying i dont like it)if you dont have room(just use Allegheny Archers with ph# and WWW adress)
the paragraph on the bow is good and well wrote....just tinker with the layout a bit and emphasize the bow as much as you can with As many photos you can fit....after all thats what your selling.... oh and dont forget to put the length of the bow, poundage rangeavailable, maybee how close to center cut the riser is and price$$$ ....
personally pictures are what pulls me into an ad...just give me the tech specs,good pics,company info and a price idea.
dont put it on the side put it at the bottom of the page horizontally(where your company info is)
if you want to keep theindian head center itunder neath the words "Iroquois Warrior" or put it in the top left corner....just a suggestion.
get rid of the logo you put with your Company name(not saying i dont like it)if you dont have room(just use Allegheny Archers with ph# and WWW adress)
the paragraph on the bow is good and well wrote....just tinker with the layout a bit and emphasize the bow as much as you can with As many photos you can fit....after all thats what your selling.... oh and dont forget to put the length of the bow, poundage rangeavailable, maybee how close to center cut the riser is and price$$$ ....
personally pictures are what pulls me into an ad...just give me the tech specs,good pics,company info and a price idea.
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